More background on the Jabberwock

^ He was called as Ohmlod and was known as a myrmidon for the government fighting injustice. Of course he was not a Thessalian he would be ancient if he was. But he was incredibly loyal to the government until the regime change that brought corrupt leaders that demanded his fealty. ^

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"The Jabberwock collects himself and tries to stand to his feet. He slips in the wet leaves as he attempts to get his feet underneath himself, so he tries again. This time he has more success and is able to stand. The foliage is wet and the air is cool in the morning light. He looks down to see the golden stone that he had tripped upon. It was partially covered in the wet leaves."